Honestly I didn’t so that well on my essay. I didn’t really try my best considering I only did my essay in three days. I didn’t even try I just wrote whatever came in mind. I also didn’t get it peer edited, adult edited, and all that. I deserve whatever Ms. Priester gives me. Three things that I can do differently are that I could work on my essay instead of rushing at the last minute. Second I can get it edited by people so that they can help me get a better grade and improve my writing skills. Third, I can try better and put more enthusiasm in it. Ms. Priester is doing everything that she possibly can do to help me.